Astral Bookworks

Polishing rough stones.Japanese localization by a novelist who writes dialogueLight novel author / Game localizer — Kazuto Amaki (天樹一翔)

A rough stone made of gathered stars begins to shine where the light touches it. I create stories as an author, polish game dialogue into Japanese, and help other writers polish theirs. Astral Bookworks is the home of that work.

For manuscript editing, see this page →

Record

A novel carried to publication — and game dialogue

I have written one long novel from web serialization to a published book. That experience is what I bring to game dialogue.

2.5M+Total views (EveryStar)
No. 3Peak, Trending ranking — Fantasy (EveryStar)
≈1.36MJapanese characters written for the web novel

Views and rankings are for the web editions on each platform (EveryStar work page: link not yet confirmed).

Web novel
Serialization began in 2021 on EveryStar, under the original title Seisansei-chū ga Isekai de Kunizukuri.
EveryStar work page (link not yet confirmed)
The same work is also published on Syosetu, Kakuyomu and Alphapolis: Alphapolis ↗(opens in a new tab) /Kakuyomu ↗(opens in a new tab)
Web edition views
EveryStar 2.5M+ / Syosetu 2M+ / Kakuyomu 500K+ (5M+ total)
Syosetu work page ↗(opens in a new tab) /Kakuyomu work page ↗(opens in a new tab)
Book
Retitled and revised, published on Kindle as Sōzōshin no Keishōsha (Heir to the Creator God)
Amazon book page ↗(opens in a new tab)
Game localization
Dialogue localization for an overseas game title (large-scale project)

Localize

Japanese localization of game dialogue

I check the meaning against the source, then shape each line into Japanese a character would actually say in that moment.

Localization of game dialogue & scenarios

Meaning is verified against the source text, then rendered as Japanese that reads naturally as spoken dialogue.

Rewrites of machine-translated / literal lines

Lines stiffened by machine translation or word-for-word rendering are rewritten in the character's own voice.

Voice, pronoun & terminology consistency

I find and fix drift in each character's speech style and first-person pronouns, and in the spelling of names and terms.

Glossaries & character voice sheets

Term choices and how each character speaks, documented in a form your whole team can share.

FormatsExcelGoogle SheetsCSV

Why hire a novelist?

Many can translate. Few can write dialogue.

Conveying the meaning correctly and having a character actually say those words, in that scene, are different skills. A line also carries the speaker's age, standing, feelings, and distance from the listener. Carrying all of that into Japanese is a writer's work.

Voices and terms held steady across ≈1.36M characters

Writing one novel across roughly 1.36 million Japanese characters meant keeping many characters' voices and a whole world's terminology consistent to the end. That discipline carries directly into localization quality.

Ambiguous lines are never guessed through

When a line's intent cannot be settled from the source alone, I always ask before finalizing it. I do not fill gaps with plausible-sounding guesses.

From literal translation to rewrite (examples)

* Fictional lines written for this page only; unrelated to any real work or project.

An old knight guarding the castle gateGruff and old-fashioned; uses no honorifics, even to superiors

Source
No one gets through this gate. Not while I still breathe.
Literal (JA)
誰もこの門を通り抜けません。私がまだ呼吸している間は。
Rewrite (JA)
この門は誰も通さん。わしの息が続くかぎりはな。

The polite register is dropped for a blunt declarative, and the archaic first person “washi” plus the trailing particle give the line years of service and resolve.

A girl minding a market stallBright and casual

Source
Welcome! Take your time — but not too much, I close at sundown!
Literal (JA)
ようこそ!あなたの時間をかけてください、しかし多すぎないでください。私は日没に閉めます!
Rewrite (JA)
いらっしゃい!ゆっくり見てってね。あ、でも日が沈んだら店じまいだから!

“Welcome” becomes a shopkeeper's actual greeting, and the dash's quick turn is recreated with “ah, demo” (“oh, but”).

A line with two readingsAn example of asking first

Source
Leave it to me. I'll take care of him.
Literal (JA)
私に任せてください。私が彼の世話をします。
Check
“Take care of” can mean “look after” or “deal with (eliminate)”, so I confirm the scene and the speaker's intent.
Rewrite (JA)
Spoken to an enemy: 「任せろ。あいつは俺が片づける」(“Leave it to me. I'll finish him.”)
While tending an ally: 「任せて。この人はわたしが看るから」(“Leave him to me. I'll look after him.”)

Rates & how to order

Rates

Translation from USD 0.12 per source word; other work quoted by volume and content

  1. Briefing

    Tell me the genre, the rough total volume, the source language, your deadline, and any requests.

  2. Sample check

    I prepare a sample from part of the text so you can confirm the voice and approach.

  3. Quote

    A quote based on volume and content.

  4. Work

    Work proceeds in the agreed direction; ambiguous lines are confirmed with you as they arise.

  5. Delivery

    Delivered in your choice of Excel, Google Sheets, or CSV.

NDA-friendly.

Works

Published work

Cover of 'Sōzōshin no Keishōsha' (Heir to the Creator God)

Fantasy · Kingdom building

創造神の継承者

Sōzōshin no Keishōsha — Heir to the Creator God: Peerless Sovereign's Otherworld Rule, “The Empire's Darkness” arc

Granted the power of a creator god in another world, the protagonist begins building a nation with his companions on land ruled by monsters. It is neither sword nor spell but the power of “creation” that starts to move the fates of people and the world.
An otherworld kingdom-building fantasy built on nationcraft and human drama. (Japanese edition)

2.5M+EveryStar views
2M+Syosetu views
500K+Kakuyomu views

No. 3 peak, EveryStar Trending — Fantasy / ≈1.36M characters

The web novel begun on EveryStar in 2021, Seisansei-chū ga Isekai de Kunizukuri, retitled and revised for its Kindle edition.

Editing

Polishing your manuscript.

I read your manuscript closely, find the passages where readers stumble and the settings that do not come across, and tell you concretely what to change so the story reaches them. (Service for Japanese manuscripts, ordered via Coconala.)

  • Contradictions in world, structure and setting
  • Character appeal and interiority
  • Readability and pacing
  • Passages where readers drop off
  • Scene staging and build-up

Original fantasy & SF fiction

The standard scope is the first 5,000 Japanese characters of a novel; consultations on game scenarios and plots are also welcome. For current prices, turnaround and reviews, see the service page on Coconala (in Japanese).

Author

The one who creates stories — and polishes them

Illustration of Kazuto Amaki

Kazuto Amaki天樹 一翔

A light novel author writing mainly fantasy and SF. His long novel, first serialized on EveryStar in 2021, was retitled, revised, and published on Kindle; the web editions have passed 5M views in total across EveryStar, Syosetu and Kakuyomu. He also works as a Japanese localizer of game dialogue and as a manuscript editor.

See Kazuto Amaki's profile →

Contact

Work inquiries

For game dialogue localization, rewrites of literal lines, glossaries and similar work, please use the form below. Translation starts at USD 0.12 per source word; other work is quoted by volume and content. NDA-friendly.

By email kazuto.amaki@gmail.com If the form is inconvenient, or you would like to attach materials, email is fine too.
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Paths

Read, or polish?

To read a story, go to the published book. To have your game's dialogue polished into Japanese, go to work inquiries. To improve your own manuscript, go to manuscript editing.

Ask about manuscript editing on Coconala ↗(opens in a new tab)